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Convolutions of an Evil Mind
Conflicts of Interest Redux 4/? (part 2 of 2) (FF7 post-AC AU)
22 hisses or Hiss in my ear....
salmastryon From: salmastryon Date: September 16th, 2010 06:55 am (UTC) (Link)
I can't believe I missed this when it was put up!!! Boy am I glad I felt the urge to reread that snippet about Seph making Zack destroy Nibelheim. Wouldn't have found this until part 5 came out otherwise.

I love the way you are ramping things up. I was a bit doubtful about the whole Rufus S2 S3 at first not sure how it would fit in everything. I should never of doubted, this chapter definitely brings it directly in with the plot.

The scene with Kunsel and Cloud was great. I have to admit I did a little chair dance of happiness.(I"m sucker for Zack and I love the way you write him. Even though technically he wasnt' there >.>)

I especially like how you included ex-SOLDIERS into all this. I do love when authors acknowledge that yeah there are more SOLDIERS out there. :P

What impresses me though is many authors get sorta lost when they throw lots of characters into the mix. But, you've been doing a great job keeping things on track with a nice tight story and making me interested in each scene!! :D
madamhydra From: madamhydra Date: September 26th, 2010 12:27 am (UTC) (Link)
Kunsel is a great character to have around, because he really KNOWS Zack, probably even better than Sephiroth. Cloud's torn because he really wants to talk to someone who can truly appreciate what a great guy Zack was (none of his other friends really do, not even Tifa).

But at the same time, Cloud's both ashamed (about pretending to be a SOLDIER, etc.) and more than a bit frightened because being near Kunsel is awakening something in Cloud's mind.... ::innocent whistle::
22 hisses or Hiss in my ear....