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Convolutions of an Evil Mind
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madamhydra
Bribefic: Moonlight Shadow (FF7 AU, icedark-elf's "Another Chance" series... maybe)
42 hisses or Hiss in my ear....
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bard_linn From: bard_linn Date: April 22nd, 2007 01:17 am (UTC) (Link)
This is very nice. I like how you made it feel like there was a reason for why Aeris didn't just tell Cloud. Best part of the fic, IMHO. Pacing was good and the lyrics worked well as breakers. Great job!

My only quibble is Aeris seems to be showing quite a bit more power than she did in game, but we'll chalk it up to AU.
madamhydra From: madamhydra Date: April 22nd, 2007 01:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
This is very nice. I like how you made it feel like there was a reason for why Aeris didn't just tell Cloud. Best part of the fic, IMHO. Pacing was good and the lyrics worked well as breakers. Great job!

Thanks! I do have a weakness for songfics, because my writing is very strongly affected by music I hear.

My only quibble is Aeris seems to be showing quite a bit more power than she did in game, but we'll chalk it up to AU.

Luckily, AUs excuse darn near anything. ^_- But yes, in this fic (and in a lot of OT4 fics), Aeris does tend to show more powers (dreams, hearing voices, etc.) than she does in the game itself.
42 hisses or Hiss in my ear....