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Convolutions of an Evil Mind
COI - Zack, dark and dangerous
39 hisses or Hiss in my ear....
bard_linn From: bard_linn Date: November 9th, 2005 04:18 am (UTC) (Link)
asdfajkldsfja *brain breaks*


More thoughtful comment when I can process this all. But DAMN is that a good plot twist!
madamhydra From: madamhydra Date: November 10th, 2005 05:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! ::offers superglue for brain:: ^_-
bard_linn From: bard_linn Date: January 11th, 2006 01:06 am (UTC) (Link)
I’m pretty sure I promised a bit more in depth review of this so here goes.

I love how you add detail to the Shinra mansion and the sheer reach of the project. It’s hard to tell exactly where it begins and ends in your world. It’s amazing how you manage to pull it off so well. I can see it fitting into canon perfectly.

The odd bond between Cloud and Reno here is intriguing. Especially with the understanding of mental connections thing. I really like it and hope we see more of it in the future.

Your take on Cloud’s stability here with the memories of Hojo is different than often seen and perhaps more real. He’s not really in control and is barely holding his own. It works wonderfully here, though I’m not sure how many others could have pulled it off in the situation.

I particularly like how you talk about the scientist wanting live specimens for feedback – or becoming a god, take your pick. You ability to see from multiple viewpoints is astounding.

Strife is an idiot in some ways. He really is an angst ridden teen. And he’s going to put his hand in the fire, I can see it now. *shakes head*
39 hisses or Hiss in my ear....